It was so good
I swallowed you whole in a different form
What are you made of?
Oh, I feel chills down my spine
Goosebumps all over
Stomach’s crumbling
I want to run then jump
Heart is pounding out of my chest
I’m sweating
I love and hate this feeling
The longer I’m holding on
It becomes exasperating
I want to let you go
I want you out of my system
Time seems travelling faster than light
Everything is in order except this disorder
This is exhausting
Inside small gray tiled kingdom of my own
Sitting like a mad queen on a frigid throne
Yes I am here, I am here
Cold and quiet
Just what I wanted
Mind is flying at a minimum destination
While waiting for this moment of expulsion
A little squeeze
A little rage without calling names
Disgusting scent lingers in the air
Hanging
Pending
Letting go
I now hear
Splooak!
You’re out just like that!
This is the art I master all my life
Diwata in Lalaland 
Reblogged this on HarsH ReaLiTy and commented:
I like the tempo I felt well reading this. Thanks for taking part in the challenge! -OM
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Yuck I made a typo! Oh well, it happens. =\
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Ahaha I know the feeling! Thanks for reblogging this post, appreciate it 🙂
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No worries. 🙂
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wow!!! Such an intense write and speaking from the heart.
May I ask what inspired you to write this poem?
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“Inside small gray tiled kingdom of my own,
Sitting like a mad queen on a frigid throne”
Let me tickle your imagination 🙂 With those two lines above, you’ll sure get an idea what inspired me. We all find ourselves in such place 🙂
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Okay.
I am intrigued.
Be right back.
Cheers,
Lance
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I’ll see you around 🙂
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Thanks for stopping by Lance : -)
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hey thanks for following my poetry blog.
love this poem
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Thank you : -)
love your page, I’ll be a frequent visitor : -)
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me too! love your name as well. i wanna go to lalaland!
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There’s always a place you can call your “lalaland” 😄 really appreciate your kind words 😄
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Perfect.
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Thank you 🙂
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The poem is amazing. Good to let go and take chances.
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Thank you very much John 🙂
I totally agree let go and take chances
or else we wouldn’t know the difference…
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Walking through ruins in my mind… I remember now…
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I love this.
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I smile. Thank you 🙂
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Splooak. Nice. I’m sold
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Haha i’m glad it caught your attention 🙂 thanks for the read and follow !!
Have a great day to you 🙂
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Very insightful.
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Thank you for stopping by and say dear Toni. I smile 🙂
Have a wonderful day to you!
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What a great poem about love and what it can do to an individual; good and bad things. It is possible to let go but it is not easy. I can relate to this poem. I love lots of the lines. I also really appreciate the way you write free verse…
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This could be about anything, not only love. It’s letting go of all the shit haha!! I thank you Jules for the wonderful comments you left, it warms my heart.. Have a great weekend to you 🙂
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letting go = forgiving 😭😒
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Mahirap pero pag nagawa mo, madali na ang lahat pwamis 😘
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yes.. and thing will get better.😊
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Sure is my friend 💗
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hahaha typo.. things**
anyway, everything’s gonna be fine.:)
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Don’t worry about the typo, it happens to me too, especially when I comment using my phone 😉
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yea! that happens a lot. kaya minsan delikado din yang typo na yan. hahahaha
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Ahaha Kerek my dear 😊
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