Grayer than gray noon
Birds are chirping happily
Dogs are barking cautiously
Chimes outside the door are welcoming
Serenading
The eyes to a new blissful memory
With the wind that blows gracefully
Grayer than gray noon
Lying here musing
In surreal atmosphere
Tickling my inner skin
Falling
Wide awake
Daydreaming
Grayer than gray noon
Sunshine’s caressing my face
In a familiar place
Surrounded by strange
Form of love
I see doves
Flying through my left ear
Straight to a clear view of what is real
Grayer than gray noon
Time is passing
Leading to dry, of this high
Abandoned sly
Waves on and off the sea shore
Same goes to a man’s traitor
Battalion of faith could save
A soul from its undeserved grave
Diwata in Lalaland 
Feels like I’m walking through a dream, or many dreams. I love the repeated line, “grayer than the gray noon.”
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Layered cake of dreams 🙂 thanks for reading, I’m really glad you enjoyed 🙂
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Grayer than gray noon ….superb writing
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Thank you very much 🙂
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I need to learn to write like you. I can’t do it.
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I’m really sure you can do it. I’m still learning as I am new to writing. I don’t know the technical aspects of writing. Most times when I write, I describe what my emotions “look like” using metaphor or even without towards the subject I’m writing about. If you have strong emotions towards the subject it won’t be hard.
I hope this kind of writing process would help you 🙂
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I mean I want to be able to delicate like you do. My Poetry is always anger filled it seems. I just close my eyes and type what I feel. Then I open them and see if it makes sense and if there needs any work done to make it flow better.
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Appreciate your comments. I wrote this post because you made think and be in the zone 🙂 thanks
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Very well done!
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Thank you 🙂
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