Poetry

Solitary Glory

Diwata35 Comments

In the absence of stars
You gaze upon every night
I’m here with you
Let me be your song
Your masterpiece
Your poetry
Gently touch my heart
Remind it to beat,
To sing the melody
A song of you and me
Spill your words and colors
All over my body
Stretch your creative thread
Sprinkle colorful feathers,
Scented flowers
Cracks of my smile
Give birth to light
You see your Self
In my eyes

The dawn is kissing the horizon
You yawn
Tired
But your hand cannot resist…
Finishing touches
Kisses on the forehead
Three steps away
Two steps turn
I feel your embrace
From behind…
I say, See you around!
You look at my ass…
I see the truth…

35 thoughts on “Solitary Glory”

    • I was inspired by the post of Jeni Mcmillan 🙂 Look at her, just beautiful. I was too shy to comment on this post but she inspired me. And I don’t have a photo of me like that so I just wrote the line “You look at my ass…” haha 🙂
      https://jenimcmillan.wordpress.com/2015/01/14/and-the-muse-whispers-create/ – the photo is not showing in the link but check her blog (if you only have the time) look for the post “And the muse whispers create” dated 14 Jan, 2015

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      • aha! i was very intrigued by the last two lines and wanted to know about what story was behind it. now that i see, i think this is more beautiful than it was ever intended. ”You look at my ass…
        I see the truth…” indeed a naked body, is nothing but the truth! lovely subconscious collaboration between you and jeni

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        • Little black kitten was intrigued..haha
          You are right and can also be interpreted differently.. That’s one interesting observation i have here in wordpress, people interpret things differently and yet, get the same feeling.. I don’t know it’s just my observation.. Anyway, Jeni is the instigator goddess 🙂 and i love this subconscious collaboration 🙂 Peace Tree!

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  2. Greetings,

    What a lovely poem which brings with it all sorts of feelings. Spiritual, sensual, and more!

    Thank you for sharing this with us.

    All good wishes,

    robert

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    • Hello Randstein and welcome to lalaland! You are right about the last lines, i’m happy it resonates to you 🙂

      Thank you, i appreciate your comment. Have a wonderful night to you 🙂

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  6. Beautiful Diwata,
    I am so happy about this connection between us! Collaboration is very exciting and I love the way it drifts into the subconsciousness and inspires. Thank you very much, oh magical poetess.

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    • I thank you Tosh and welcome to lalaland 🙂 such sweet to be called a poet but i don’t consider myself as one, it’s just me writing and sharing 🙂 and very grateful to have met like minded souls, across the world! Nice to meet you, enjoy blogging 🙂

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