I fall,
Letter by letter,
Word by word,
In rhythm and timing…
Visualize the moon,
Weaving
With stars,
Tinsel by tinsel…
And then, all at once
Like the explosion
Of a supernova
Touching distant galaxies
I’m down to my very soul
I fall, I fall…
Smoothly
And then hastily…
The way a meteor flares
As it slithers across the night sky
Within an orgasmic sigh
You catch me by your eye…
Like love, worth holding
It turns to fire:
Intense,
Wild and free…
You become the flame
Dancing across my skin…
Blazing brightly
In your arms…
And within your heart,
You turn me
Into the sweetest smell of ash…
Hi Diwata, what an expressive and powerful poem, full of gems, of interesting rhythms, sounds and symbols. Thanks for blogging it it really gave me (and I’m sure many others) great joy. Best wishes and blessings, Charles.
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Hi Charles,
Glad to see you here! I’ve just read your comment, I found it on my Spam comment folder. Anyhow, I’m happy to share this moment with you 🙂
Thank you for such a wonderful comment, it warms my heart! Have a lovely day.
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Pleasure, and equally sorry i have taken so long to respond, but my line has been down for two agonizing days! Have a great week, best wishes and blessings, Charles.
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No problem Charles. I hope all is good now with your line. I’ll drop by your blog when I wander around WordPres. Enjoy your week too.
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Hi Diwata, the technician came this afternoon to work on the line, so hopefully things will go better now, that’s when I don’t fall asleep in the chair before I can look at my blog! :-), best wishes and blessings Charles.
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fiery!
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Swooosh Booom!!
Thanks kindly for stopping by 🙂
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lol, you’re welcome!
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Diwata level talaga.
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Aysa, I bow to your comment!
ahaha salamat.. Anong bago sayo, panigurado meron, lilipad ako sa pugad mo mayang konti 🙂
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ha ha ha. walang bago, kung ano-anong kalokohan lang 😛
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meron, haha binabasa ko na at hindi kalokohan, may LOVE eh 🙂
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ha ha ha 😛
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beautiful visual poetry
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Smiles…
Appreciation…
Love…
Meooowwwww! 🙂
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We are all stardust. Our flesh and bones are made of recycled star atoms.
Have a lovely week-end on your side of the world.
B.
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Yes, we are all stardust! I wrote this intuitively, this is how I fall on earth, this how it feels, Weeee haha 🙂 have a lovely sunday Brian
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Intuition can be the best counsel. 😉
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What a riveting poem, Diwata. I’m a fan instantly.
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Kamusta kabayan Sony?! Ah salamat naman at nagustuhan mo… Will check your blog soon.. Ingat po tyo dyan! 🙂
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I love it! And your audience is steadily growing…
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I love it, too Frederick 🙂 Nice to see you back here! Ah, yes, I see new faces, they are welcome! I haven’t been to your blog, will take a glimpse soon. Have a warm cozy night over there!
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The imagery is so unique and powerful 🙂 ❤
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Thank you beautiful Sanghamitra! I so love your name… Do you have a new writing/s? Ah, dont worry about it, I’ll check your blog real soon.. Love to you dear lady😘
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You’re too nice 🙂 If I’m beautiful you’re pretty 😉
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Oh I love you now!!😍😘
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Wooo! I found that rather exciting. 🙂 Thanks for sharing
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Sure is, Andy! Thanks again for checking in, much appreciated. Cheers!
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Orgasmic sigh…that says it all.
While I was reading the poem, what was registering in my mind is the person who will always be there with no matter what.
Glad I have more than one. Parents, siblings…family
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Happy to know, send my warm regards and hugs to your family. Thanks for a wonderful comment Sony.
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A beautiful post….spreading the magic of the stars, lovely indeed. Peace and love, Kim
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Your comments warm my heart 🙂 Thank you for reading and showered me with stars! Love 💖to you, dear K
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Oh, I am so happy to meet kindred spirits in this big wide world, and your writing is inspiring, peace and love and a lovely weekend to you too, Kim⭐️🌟💫✨☄😊💜
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